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Comments on Fantasy & Science Fiction, Sept '07

On the 16th, [info]johnjosephadams posted a note in his blog announcing that Fantasy & Science Fiction Magazine would give free copies of the September, 2007 issue if the recipients blogged about it. And you had to write something of substance. As Mr. Adams puts it, So instead of blogging "The cover sucks," you're supposed to write "The cover OF THE SEPTEMBER 2007 ISSUE sucks." Not being one to turn down free words of quality, I volunteered. I tend read magazines hit-and-miss so I'm going to my comments in pieces. I won't call them "reviews" because, as Mr. Keen points out in the Cult of the Amature, I one of the monkey set.

First two items...

Requirements for the Mythology Merit Badge by Kevin N. Haw - I don't get it. It's a list of requirements for a merit badge, I guess the kind you used to get in the Boy Scouts. There was absolutely no context for this little piece. I just don't get it. Maybe if there was an opener about "Today boys and girls, we are going to work on your Mythology Merit Badge. As you know, this badge is mandatory to become a Junior Giant." There were some amusing ideas but I think some setup would have gone a long way.

If We Can Save Just One Child... by Robert Reed - This was an interesting story. The title was the thing that caught my eye; it sounds so much like our PC culture today. Everything is for the children. How did we manage to grow up? Reed's story resonates with ideas from the world today: the undercurrent of fear, the cameras, the "police" presence, the incident reports, the "I need to ask you a couple of questions." He did a good job keeping the reader wondering what the big fear is until the middle of the story. Some interesting interplay between the characters. Interesting climax and resolution. Could have been a little tighter, I think, but a good story.

More to come...

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(Anonymous)
Mythology Merit Badge

I'm sorry it didn't work for you, but the lack of context was intentional. I wanted to tell a story without, well, telling a story. The idea was to take a nontraditional form and sequentially reveal the details until the spoiler in the last sentence - a spoiler, which I'll be the first to admit, would make for a a kind of boring story if that were all there is. With that in place, the framework let me throw out a bunch of one liners.

Again, sorry it didn't work for you. You don't sound like you've been turned off on F&SF just because of my scribblings, but if you have I want to beg you to keep reading and supporting the magazine. I read it every month cover to cover and always find at least one story where I say "huh?" It's still a fantastic magazine deserving support.

If it makes you feel better, the kind of extreme "found documents" approach from "Mythology" only works once in a blue moon and even then has to be kept very short (my piece was about 1K words). You won't be seeing too many more like that from me, as it's nearly impossible to anything particularly complex that way. I also doubt you'll see another contextless piece like that in F&SF again for another 12 months.

FYI, I only got my contributor's copy yesterday, so I haven't read Robert Reed's story yet. I'm envious!

Thanks for reading,

Kevin N. Haw
http://www.theHaws.org (http://www.theHaws.org)

Re: Mythology Merit Badge

No worry, I still F&SF. Thank you for taking the time to respond and explaining what you were attempting. And don't be offended - I never could get hooked on Heinlein's Stranger in a Strange Land. While I didn't connect on this piece, I do hope to see your stuff in future issues.